URGENT: Follow up letter

[taha30336]

Hi everyone,
Could you please check my follow up letter:

Dear Ms X,
Dear Mr X;

I applied for your Internship position in mechanical Modeling and we had an interview about ten days ago but I have not yet had a response. Since I am very interested in this position with your company, I am writing to inquire about the status of my application.
I am confident I have the skills and knowledge you are looking for .I really appreciate your taking the time to read and respond to this email, and once again thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,
Thank you.

[Gillnetter]

Looks good to me.