Could someone please help me with my statement of purpose?

[dsanz]

I have written my statement of purpose for graduate school. I am entering a physics Ph.D. program in the USA. I was wondering if someone could help check if there are some notable mistakes, or any other advice regarding continuity perhaps.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE, this is very important to me.
I guess the best way to do this is by sending you a private message with the essay in it. It is not very long by the way.

I hope someone can help me!
Cheers.

[RonBee]

I guess the best way to do this is by sending you a private message with the essay in it. It is not very long by the way.

No, it isn't. The best way would be to post it here: CVs, Resumes and Applications - UsingEnglish.com ESL Forum