Proofreading cover letter

[Ellena]

Please, help me proofread this cover letter! I'm really waiting for your comments! Thank you in advance!

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your advertisement in “Expert” magazine for general part-time work in your company “Donbass Investment and Development Company”
I am a 19-year-old Ukrainian student from Makeevka. At present I am studying in Harkiv National Technical University in economic faculty. I was taken part in some international business programs. Also I have studied English for 10 years.
I am interested in economy very much. I am also a member of the financial club. I want to work in your company because I am interested in construction from an economic point of view. I haven’t got work experience, but I wish I could realize my potential.
I would like to work in afternoons and evenings because in the morning I have classes in the university.
I look forward to hearing from you.

[billmcd]

Please, help me proofread this cover letter! I'm really waiting for your comments! Thank you in advance!

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reply to your advertisement in “Expert” magazine for general part-time work in your company “Donbass Investment and Development Company”

I am a 19-year-old Ukrainian student from Makeevka. At present I am studying in Harkiv National Technical University in economic faculty (not familiar with this term, but if understood at the university, OK) . I was taken parthave been involved in someseveral international business programs. Also, I have studied English for 10 years.

I am interested in economy economics very much. I am also a member of the financial club. I want would like to work in your company because I am interested in construction from an economic point of view. I haven’t got work experience, but I wish I could realize my potential. I would like to work in your company not only to gain the experience but also to contribute to the company's mission and objectives. I would like to work in because in the morning I have classes at the university mornings but I am available afternoons and evenings.

I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.

Nice work. A few suggestions. Good luck.

[Ellena]

Thanks a lot, billmcd!!!!! You have really made my day so far!!!