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Please start all over again. Negative assessment - you start your cover letter saying you basically could not handle school. I reconsidered my plan - it sounds like you are applying for a job but it is option 2/2 Further on my professional development - fluff, your potential employer wants to know what you can do for them. I would like - you would like or you want? You may think this is harsh - anything wishy washy moves to file 13 - out of sight. Try again! Sit in front of a mirror and talk like you are in an interview then write it out. |
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| Your cover letter needs to be rewritten. It only shows your negative attitude. I'm sorry to write this, but this is true. A well-written cover letter is a most effective tool in your job hunt. To ensure that you make it into the probables pile you must create a targeted, professional cover letter that ensures your resume is given the attention it deserves. Also, the spelling of 'assesment' is wrong. It should be assessment. --------------------------------------- Last edited by Tdol; 25-Mar-2006 at 08:20. |
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