Good luck. For sure it needs to be proofread more. My other dear colleagues will give you a hand.can any one please correct my motivation letter
I appreciate the opportunity to provide further background in support of my application for ………………………
The scholarship is a great chance to express myself and be part of the change that is occurring in the society.
I hope to get that scholarship to discover new cultures, communities and new ways to learn.
My dream is simple but I think it's also deep, just to see my country and my society better and make a contribution to the development. I want to be part of the change and new ideas around me, I think it is more important for me than getting that scholarship, but I hope to have a chance to achieve it through you and to be the reason that pushed me forward.
Really, I do not want be the perfect ideal girl that follows the rules any more.The rules like the one that was stated as THE GIRL CAN NOT TRAVEL ALONE .
Actually, it is the first time that I travel outside the Arabian Countries. So, help me please to discover the world and think outside the box .
Because of love, change and passion I want to be part of your community .
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