Seeking a responsible position

[sweetie_s]

Dear Teacher,

Could you please correct and modify the following replacing "should" ?

Seeking a responsible position enabling me to use my talent, skill and experience. The position should offer challenging assignment and the opportunity to coordinate work in the same.

[Tdol]

will??

[sweetie_s]

Originally Posted by tdol

will??

If I change SHOULD to WILL, now the following sentences are grametically correct...is punctuation correct?

Seeking a responsible position enabling me to use my talent, skill and experience. The position will offer challenging assignment and the opportunity to coordinate work in the same.

Could you modify it to a good form please.

[Tdol]

How about:
The position will be a challenging assignment with the opportunity to coordinate work