Re: Help me! Please correct it . Thank you so much.
Before anyone else looks at this, I suggest you remove the personal information from this post. Unless you have made those details up, it contains your full name, date of birth, address, phone numbers and a lot of other personal information. It is not a good idea to make this information public.
In fact, in case you don't see this in time, I am going to edit your post to remove the sensitive information.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.