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| Please give me a hand reading the cover and suggesting modifications and corrections November 1, 2006 Mrs. XXXX I’m writing this letter in order to give You some information about my working skills. I spoke with Mr XXX, and he talk me about a possibility to send You my resume showing my education, experience, and background to take a chance to work at XXXXXX. I have over 16 years experience at the technical and help desk departments. May I arrange an interview to further discuss my qualifications? I am available for an interview at a mutually convenient time. Thank you for your time and consideration. Alexander XXX XXXXXX Rome - Italy +39-XXXXXX/ +39-XXXXXXXX EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Objective Seeking full time position at the Help Desk area. Skills • 3rd , 2nd , and 1st Help desk Level assistance. • Microsoft systems administrator. • Network Administrator. • Visual Basic 6 Programmer. • Microsoft OS Help Desk. • Microsoft Office Help Desk. • 3rd part Help Desk assistance. Experience XXXXXX www.XXXXXXX.it Help Desk Manager, VB6 programmer, Web Designer, Network Administrator March 2005 - today • IT responsible • All levels Help Desk position • VB6 Programmer • Web designer using Macromedia tools • Network Administrator XXXXXXXsrl www.XXXXXXXX.com Help Desk technician, Network Administrator, November 2004 - today • IT responsible • All levels Help Desk position • Network Administrator XXXXXXX S.r.l. www.XXXXXXX.it Network Administrator, Help Desk, hardware technical support February 1990 - July 2004 • Responsible of the computers maintenance and configuration. • Network manager. • E-mail Service manager. Technical support on: Security policies, Firewall configuration, Backup & Recovery procedures, Responsible of the Hardware and Software platform, and technical support to the Formation Classrooms Education XXXXXX University www.XXXX.edu.es XXXXXXXX Degree date: 1985 Certificates: • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX Courses: • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX Seminaries: • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX • XXXXXXX |
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| Don't use contractions. Don't capitalise 'you'. I wouldn't use a direct question. I'd suggest that the interview should be at their convenience to be polite, then negotiate. |
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