Could somebody check my CV?

[wafer1992]

I've written my CV and i'm not sure is it without bads or something. Could somebody check it for me please?

[Tdol]

It's formatted as a picture; can you put the text up?

[wafer1992]

Hi Tdol
Sure here it is

[wafer1992]

Tdol I've put the text up but i can't see your reply. If you find some time, please check it. It's very important for me. If there is still something wrong with attachment:

R****** M********
street B******* *
05-*** Z*******
Mobile: +48 0601 *** ***
Telephone: +48 022 *** ** **
E-mail: ***********@op.pl

Personal information
Nationality: Polish
Date of birth: June 25, 1958 r.
Place of birth: Lwówek Śląski

Work experience

02/2002 – 06/2006
COMMUNE OFFICE
Jabłonna
Head of Geodesy and real properties’ Administration Department – making administrative decisions with head’s of the town authorization, managing the town’s real properties, planning budget, supervision of all works making in department

09/2000 - 02/2002
GEODETIC SERVICES
Warsaw
Owner of firm – management firm, winning of order, supervision and executing of works.

06/1999 - 08/2000
P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
Warsaw
Engineer of geodesist - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, regulation legal position of grounds, preparing documentation for civil - legal use, complex geodetic attendance of investments in Warsaw (buildings at street Abramowskiego – Centrum, at street Dzięcieliny - Międzylesie at street Wąwozowa - Kabaty, at street Bukowińska - Centrum)

05/1998 - 05/1999
MILITARY TECHNICAL ACADEMY IN WARSAW
Warsaw
Technical scientific specialist – projecting of systems GIS

08/1997- 05/1998
PROVINCIAL OFFICE
Tarnów
Provincional inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

11/1990 - 08/1997
REGIONAL OFFICE
Dębica
Superior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with foundation of database of record of ground and buildings in computerized information system.

02/1988 - 11/1990
COMMUNE OFFICE
Dębica
Head of Geodesy and Ground Administration Department – making decisions with Director’s authorization, administrating of commune’s real properties, planning budget, making reports, supervision of all works making in department

12/1985 - 01/1988
GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHISIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW LOCAL DEPARTMENT IN CRAKOW
Crakow
Engineer of geodesist – geodetic attendance of investments

Education

1985
Stanisław Staszic Mining- Metallurgical Academy in Crakow
Crakow
Engineer of geodesist
Professional entitlement 1, 2 and 4 in range of geodesy

Additional information

Experience in work related with real properties’ administration, knowledge of legal regulations from range of geodesy and real properties’ administration – statutes and these statutes’ executable acts, KPA, KC, law of procedure at administrative chancery, act about Leading Administrative Chancery, regulations concerning spatial administration of real properties, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations from range of public orders, personal data and non-public information, computer skills - proficient in work with Ms Office (Word, Excel, Access), liability, obligatory, regularity, engagement, communicativeness, ability of leading group
Weak german language knowledge

PS. Sorry for the mess I've made.

Greetings wafer.

[Tdol]

street B******* *- Street...
real properties’- Real Estate
head’s of the town authorization- with the town council
planning budget- budgets (or the budget)
all works making- all works done by the
winning of order-order
Engineer of geodesist- Geodesist Engineer
buildings at street Abramowskiego- buildings in Abramowskiego Street (etc)
systems GIS- GIS systems
with foundation of database of record- with setting up a database recording...
with Director’s authorization- the
geodetic attendance- ?? assessment??
legal regulations from range of- delete 'from range'
liability, obligatory- plural
regularity- regulations?
engagement, communicativeness, ability of leading group- good at communications and leading a group
Weak german language knowledge- Elementary/Intermediate German ( you don't mention English)

[wafer1992]

Thank you Tdol you are great. Your post were very helpful.

geodetic attendance- ?? assessment??

When I wrote geodetic attendance, I meant all services related with geodesy (for this investments). So which word is better?

regularity- regulations?

I meant, that I'm systematic , but I couldn't find properly noun.

liability, obligatory - plural

Here I had also problems with nouns and I meant I'm responsible and conscientious. So what should I do with it?

I'll post corrected version of CV. Maybe you have more suggestions.

R****** M********
Street B******* *
05-*** Z*******
Mobile: +48 0601 *** ***
Telephone: +48 022 *** ** **
E-mail: ***********@op.pl

Personal information
Nationality: Polish
Date of birth: June 25, 1958 r.
Place of birth: Lwówek Śląski

Work experience

02/2002 – 06/2006
COMMUNE OFFICE
Jabłonna
Head of Geodesy and real estate Administration Department – making administrative decisions with the town council authorization, managing the town’s real estate, budgets, supervision of all works done by the department

09/2000 - 02/2002
GEODETIC SERVICES
Warsaw
Owner of firm – management firm, order, supervision and executing of works.

06/1999 - 08/2000
P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
Warsaw
Geodesist Engineer - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, regulation legal position of grounds, preparing documentation for civil - legal use, complex ???geodetic attendance??? of investments in Warsaw (buildings in Abramowskiego Street – Centrum, in Dzięcieliny Street - Międzylesie in Wąwozowa Street - Kabaty, in Bukowińska Street - Centrum)

05/1998 - 05/1999
MILITARY TECHNICAL ACADEMY IN WARSAW
Warsaw
Technical scientific specialist – projecting of GIS systems

08/1997- 05/1998
PROVINCIAL OFFICE
Tarnów
Provincional inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

11/1990 - 08/1997
REGIONAL OFFICE
Dębica
Superior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with setting up database recording of ground and buildings in computerized information system.

02/1988 - 11/1990
COMMUNE OFFICE
Dębica
Head of Geodesy and Ground Administration Department – making decisions with the Director’s authorization, administrating of commune’s real estate, budgets, making reports, supervision of all works done by the department

12/1985 - 01/1988
GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHYSIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW LOCAL DEPARTMENT IN CRAKOW
Crakow
Geodesist Engineer – ???geodetic attendance??? of investments

Education

1985
Stanisław Staszic Mining- Metallurgical Academy in Crakow
Crakow
Geodesist Engineer
Professional entitlement 1, 2 and 4 in range of geodesy

Additional information
Experience in work related with real estate administration, knowledge of legal regulations of geodesy and real estate administration – statutes and these statutes’ executable acts, KPA, KC, law of procedure at administrative chancery, act about Leading Administrative Chancery, regulations concerning spatial administration of real estate, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations of public orders, personal data and non-public information, computer skills - proficient in work with Ms Office (Word, Excel, Access), ???liabilities???, ???obligatories???, ???regularity???, engagement, good at communications and leading a group
Polish - native
English - good
Elementary German

Best regards.

[Katz]

02/2002 – 06/2006
MUNICIPAL OFFICE
Jabłonna
Head of Geodesy and Real Estate Administration Department – making administrative decisions with the town council authorization, managing the town’s real estate, budgets, supervision of all works done by the department

09/2000 - 02/2002
GEODETIC SERVICES
Warsaw
Company owner – supervision and executing of works.

06/1999 - 08/2000
P.B. ECO Sp. z o.o.
Warsaw
Geodesist Engineer - preparing documentation of planned investments, agreeing upon of project, resolving legal status of lots, preparing documentation for legal use, providing complex geodetic assistance for investments in Warsaw (buildings in Abramowskiego Street – Centrum, in Dzięcieliny Street - Międzylesie, in Wąwozowa Street - Kabaty, in Bukowińska Street - Centrum)

05/1998 - 05/1999
MILITARY UNIVERSITY OF TECHNOLOGY (WAT)
Warsaw
Technical and scientific specialist – designing GIS systems

08/1997- 05/1998
PROVINCIAL OFFICE
Tarnów
Provincial inspector – supervision and control of basic territorial units

11/1990 - 08/1997
REGIONAL OFFICE
Dębica
Senior regional inspector – coordinating and supervising works related with setting up database recording of lots and buildings in a computerized information system.

02/1988 - 11/1990
MUNICIPAL OFFICE
Dębica
Head of Geodesy and Land Administration Department – making decisions with the Director’s authorization, administrating of municipality’s real estate, budgets, making reports, supervision of all works done by the department

12/1985 - 01/1988
GEOPROJEKT GEOLOGICAL-PHYSIOGRAPHIC AND GEODETIC ENTERPRISE OF ARCHITECTURE IN WARSAW, LOCAL BRANCH IN CRACOW
Cracow
Geodesist Engineer – geodetic assistance for investments

Education

1985
Stanisław Staszic Mining and Metallurgical Academy in Cracow
Cracow
Geodesist Engineer
Professional certificates of 1, 2 and 4 grade in geodesy

Additional information
Work experience related with real estate administration, knowledge of legislation regarding geodesy and real estate administration – statutes acts, the Polish Administrative Proceedings Code, the Polish Civil Code, regulations concerning spatial development of real estate, regulations concerning geodetic and cartographic law, regulations of competitive tendering, personal data and non-public information

IT skills - Proficient in MS Office (Word, Excel, Access) Polish - native
English - good
German - elementary

[Katz]

Sorry I didn't do the corrections in bold, but you should be able to figure out what has been changed. I think it makes a more sense to me now. I would cross out your character traits from the text at all if I were you - the right place for them is in your cover letter. Good luck.

[wafer1992]

BIG thanks Katz and Tdol, your suggestions were very very very helpful. I think now my CV is without any mistake. Thank you one more time