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Old 16-Nov-2007, 22:49
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Hello all,

I really appreciate if somenone would help me correcting my letter for a job application. Thenk you very much.

I appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years work experience, both as an employee and as a free-lancer consultant. As free-lancer I worked with companies from a wide scope of activity sectors. Hence, I had amplified considerably my experience and empower my professional vision. I believe to possess the essential adjectives towards success: professional, dynamic, autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and easiness to learn despite being a woman of strong moral and firm principles.

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Old 17-Nov-2007, 03:51
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Just a few suggestions... Take them or not as you wish...

I welcome challenges and I am able and extremely motivated. I am a results orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years work experience, both as an employee and as a freelance consultant. As freelance consultant I worked with companies from a wide scope of activity sectors. Hence, I have amplified my experience and empowered my professional vision. I believe I possess the essential adjectives of success. I am professional, dynamic, autonomous, sociable and dedicated. I have excellent organizational and technical skills and I believe in teamwork. I adapt easily to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and ability to learn. I am a woman of strong moral principles.
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Hi_there_Carl,

Thank you very much for your suggestions!
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