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Old 20-Nov-2007, 23:34
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in position of Volunteer of IT in your organization. I have just received information about this position by your announcement from Goodwill organization. Please find an enclosed resume, which further details my work experience and qualifications.

I graduated Bachelor degree of Computer Science at Norton University. In the course of my studies, and especially for my subject in Computer Science, I have complete several courses in the field of IT. As you will see from my enclosed CV, I had training at Camnet Internet Service Provider, National Bank of Cambodia. I used to work at DDD Organization as data entry and 888 Corporation as Field Service Engineering. Anyway I am an enthusiastic and friendly person and enjoy working with people, both young and old.

My backgrounds seem fit your requirement well. I am confident that I can perform the work effectively and efficiently. I look forward to meeting you to discuss your needs and my ability to meet them in more detail. In the meantime, please do not hesitate to contact me with any questions you may have.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely




Chao Pov


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Phnom Penh, Cambodia.

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Personality data

Sex : Male

Nationality : Cambodia

Date of birth : December 09, 1984

Place of birth : Battambang Province

Education

2001 - 2005 : Norton University
Computer Science

Bachelor degree of Computer Science.

2000 : Presh Monivong High school

High school graduate.

Training Course

Sep, 05 - Feb, 06 : Computer and Language Training Class
Networking

- Configuring and Administering Windows 2000 Server, 2003 Server

- Networking Architecture and Networking Design

- Implementing with CISCO Routing and Switching

- Mail Server (MDaemon and Ms. Exchange Server)

Jul - Nov, 2004 : Center Information Technology
Networking

- Windows Networking and Windows NT

Aug - Nov, 2003 : World Computer Center
Computer Repairing


Apr - Jun, 2000 : ABC Computer
Accounting (Quick Book pro)


Aug - Nov, 2000 : ABC Computer
Microsoft Office

Work Experience

Apr - Nov, 2007 : 888 Corporations

Worked in Field Service Department.

Oct, 06 - Apr, 07 : Digital Divide Data

Worked in Operator field to data entry.

Mar - May, 2005 : Camnet Internet Service

Has training about connect internet follow Dial up connection.

8 - 22, Dec 2005 : National Bank of Cambodia

Has training about Networkin Computer Information Department.


Order Skill

Adobe Photoshop, MacromediaDream weaver.

Language

KhmerNative

EnglishGood

Interested

Research, Reading and Sport.

Reference

Mr. Siv Vibol

IT Specialist, GT-Tell Cambodia
Tel: (855) 012 480 684

Mr. Kim Hong

Channel Sale Executive, Neeka Limited.
Tel: (855) 012 867 671
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in the position of....
Please find my resume (enclosed)
I graduated from Norton University with a Bachelor's degree in computer science.
I have completed several courses in....

Delete "Anyway" (last sentence, second paragraph).

My background seems to fit your requirements well.

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