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    mrbillybob is offline Newbie
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    Default Please Check my Resume

    Hi, I am applying for a job at a small local computer repair shop. I was wondering if there is any editing that you would recommend, Thanks.
    Matt Davidson
    1 Newland Dr.
    OpenSource, 00--00--00 E2E 100
    Home Phone: 000-0000 · Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Career Objective: To obtain a position in fixing and working with computers.

    Qualifications

    Built Systems and Installed Software
    Customer Service Experience
    Website Development

    Education
    Kennebecasis Valley High School (Grade 11 Student) 2004 – Present
    Quispamsis, New Brunswick

    Work Experience
    Telegraph Journal, Quispamsis June 2003 – Present
    + Carrier, Delivering newspapers to customers Monday through Saturday by 7:00 AM.
    + Responsible for handling money and managing customer subscription accounts.

    Skills
    For the past 5 years I have built a number of computer systems for friends and family, and have installed the operating systems and related software. I enjoy working on computers and I am always keeping my skills current on the latest technologies.

    Interests
    Computers (Hardware, Fixing)
    Designing Websites

    References
    Janet McIntyre (Telegraph Journal Customer)
    000-0000 (H)

    Margie Ryan (Former Teacher)
    000-0000 (W)

    Mr. Stackhouse (Telegraph Journal Manager)
    000-0000 (W)

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: Please Check my Resume

    First observation I would make is that "Qualifications" is usually the courses you may have taken, such as a degree in computing, which give you a qualification in something. What you have under this heading should really appear under skills.

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