Please Check my Resume

[mrbillybob]

Hi, I am applying for a job at a small local computer repair shop. I was wondering if there is any editing that you would recommend, Thanks.

Matt Davidson

1 Newland Dr.
OpenSource, 00--00--00 E2E 100
Home Phone: 000-0000 · Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

Career Objective: To obtain a position in fixing and working with computers.

Qualifications

Built Systems and Installed Software
Customer Service Experience
Website Development

Education
Kennebecasis Valley High School (Grade 11 Student) 2004 – Present
Quispamsis, New Brunswick

Work Experience
Telegraph Journal, Quispamsis June 2003 – Present
+ Carrier, Delivering newspapers to customers Monday through Saturday by 7:00 AM.
+ Responsible for handling money and managing customer subscription accounts.

Skills
For the past 5 years I have built a number of computer systems for friends and family, and have installed the operating systems and related software. I enjoy working on computers and I am always keeping my skills current on the latest technologies.

Interests
Computers (Hardware, Fixing)
Designing Websites

References
Janet McIntyre (Telegraph Journal Customer)
000-0000 (H)

Margie Ryan (Former Teacher)
000-0000 (W)

Mr. Stackhouse (Telegraph Journal Manager)
000-0000 (W)

[Anglika]

First observation I would make is that "Qualifications" is usually the courses you may have taken, such as a degree in computing, which give you a qualification in something. What you have under this heading should really appear under skills.