CV Correction

[Xiaofa]

After three years without using English, I have decided to leave France to live in China. So difficult to accept that ten years of English lessons have disappeared in few years. I am working to recover my knowledges but I need help to correct my CV. I put it under these lines. Thanks to people who will help me

EDUCATION AND QUALIFICATIONS
2006-2007
3rd year of electrical engineering Licensing
Learning through correspondence by the CNED
The first half is validated
2005-2007
Military student at École militaire de l'air,
Commissioned officer mechanics formation for the French air force
Learning the administrative management, Electrical and mechanical engineering related to aerospace
2002-2004
BTEC Higher National Diploma in electrical engineering and computer industry
IUT de Brest.
2002
Baccalauréat, ‘A’ levels equivalent,
School of L’Harteloire
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
2005- …
Commissioned officer mechanics for the French air force
Managing a group of 30 people.
Coordination of instruments for the deployment of telecommunications facilities on national and international infrastructures.
2004-2005
Training period required during 6 months for the Eramet company.
Development and Improvement of a producing station.
New Caledonia, France.
Summer
2002-2004
Employ for the Mac Donalds company
Beginning as a waiter and evolution until the post of manager.
1998-1999
Member at the general advice of the young people of my region.
First tasks with responsibilities.
SKILLS
Languages
French: mother tongue.
English: fluent.
German: school level.
Chinese: beginner

Data
processing
knowledge
Programming languages: C, C++, VHDL.
Software used: Windows, Linux, Office, Photoshop, InDesign, Autocad, Matlab Simulink ….

LEISURE ACTIVITIES
Sports
Practical swimming (13years) and foot race (5years)
May 2008: participation in the organization of regional military Swimming competitions (Paris)

Others
Military parachute jumps and variety dancing.
Driving License

[Anglika]

After three years without using English, I have decided to leave France to live in China. So difficult to accept that ten years of English lessons have disappeared in few years. I am working to recover my knowledges but I need help to correct my CV. I put it under these lines. Thanks to people who will help me

EDUCATION AND QUALIFICATIONS
2006-2007
3rd year of electrical engineering licensing
Learning through correspondence with the CNED
The first half is validated

2005-2007
Military student at École militaire de l'air,
Commissioned officer mechanics formation for the French air force Sounds odd in English - could you give the French for this so that we can work out what the equivalent might be?
Learning administrative management, and electrical and mechanical engineering related to aerospace

2002-2004
BTEC Higher National Diploma in electrical engineering and computer industry
IUT de Brest.

2002
Baccalauréat, ‘A’ levels equivalent,
School of L’Harteloire [Give the French name of the school]

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

2005- …
Commissioned officer in the French air force
Managing a group of 30 people.
Coordination of instruments for the deployment of telecommunications facilities on national and international infrastructures.

2004-2005
Six months of training with the Eramet Company.
Development and improvement of a production station.
New Caledonia and France.

Summer 2002-2004
Macdonalds
Joined as a waiter and progressed to manager.

1998-1999
Member at the general advice of the young people of my region. Member of group providing general advice to young people in my region
First tasks with responsibilities.

SKILLS
Languages
French: mother tongue.
English: fluent.
German: school level.
Chinese: beginner

Data processing knowledge:
Programming languages: C, C++, VHDL.
Software used: Windows, Linux, Office, Photoshop, InDesign, Autocad, Matlab Simulink ….

LEISURE ACTIVITIES
Sports
Practical swimming (13years)
Running (5years)
May 2008: Participation in the organization of regional military swimming competitions (Paris)

Others
Military parachute jumps
variety dancing. What do you mean by this?


Driving License

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[Xiaofa]

Thanks for the rapidity.
Varity dancing is maybe saloon dancing. I mean rock dancing, salsa, valse.
And "Commissioned officer mechanics formation" is the formation that I have followed to become an officier in french air force. French translation is : "Formation d'officier mécanicien de l'air"
Again thanks you

[RonBee]

The word you are looking for is training. You underwent training to become a member of the French Air Force.

[Anglika]

Thanks for the rapidity.
Varity dancing is maybe saloon dancing. I mean rock dancing, salsa, valse = "ballroom dancing"
And "Commissioned officer mechanics formation" is the formation that I have followed to become an officier in french air force. French translation is : "Formation d'officier mécanicien de l'air" Training as Flight Engineer
Again thanks you

I think that this is the nearest in English.

[RonBee]

Direct translation

French
Formation d'officier mécanicien de l'air

English
Training of engineer officer of the air

Translation:

training to become a flight engineer