...I have been following.......Hi! as I really try to write "targeted" cover letters for each firm, I would like to ask again for a second cover letter correction... I hope this is not too bold as I know there are other people who need help, too...
I'm particularly unsure about comma rules. I'd be very thankful for any comment!
Since I started studies, I have followed the developments in your firm with great interest. Your emphasis on the social dimension of architecture and particularly your commitment to environmentally -sensitive projects and sustainability are very impressive. Thus, I would be very happy to put my skills into good use in your firm. I am enthusiastic, eager to develop my skills, and willing to work long hours when a project demands it.
No comma before and
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