motivation letter help

[mike009]

Please help me correcting the following:

Dear Sir

I read with interest your job posting for a Jave developer.

I have good programming skills that can be improved with experience.
For the last 7 months I have been involved in industrial engineering studies seeking for more knowledge and experience.

I'm ready for any kind of training; I have no problem with traveling or working remotely.
I am a Belgian national, so I don't need to have a work permit. Additional writing samples and my resume are attached. If I can provide you with any further information on my background and qualifications, please let me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kind regards,



Mike

[goldenboytim]

Please help me correcting the following:

Dear Sir

I read with interest your job posting for a Jave developer.

I have good programming skills that can be improved with experience.
For the last 7 months I have been involved in industrial engineering studies seeking for more knowledge and experience.

I'm ready for any kind of training; I have no problem with traveling or working remotely.
I am a Belgian national, so I don't need to have a work permit. Additional writing samples and my resume are attached. If I can provide you with any further information on my background and qualifications, please let me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Kind regards,



Mike

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to apply for the post as a Java Developer.

I have excellent programming skills, and over the last 7 months I've gained considerable experience during my industrial engineering studies.

I'm keen to learn, and I'm happy to travel and work away from home if the job requires this. Also, as a Belgian national, I don't need a work permit.

I've attached my resume and additional writing samples, and will send you more information about my background and qualifications if required.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards

Mike

Good luck!!!

Tim

[bspkumar]

I have made simple modifications to goldenboytim reply but his letter looks simple and good enough.



Dear Sir/Madam

I have seen your job posting for java develepor.I would like to apply for the post.

I think my skills matches with your requirements.I have good programming skills, and over the last 7 months I've gained considerable experience during my industrial engineering studies.

I'm keen to learn, and I'm happy to travel and work away from home if the job requires this. Also, as a Belgian national, I don't need a work permit.

Enclosed is a copy of my resume and additional writing samples, which more fully details my qualifications for the position.

I hope to hear from you soon.Within the next week I will contact you to confirm that you received my email and resume.

Thankyou for your consideration.

Regards

Mike

[mike009]

Thank you bspkumar
Thank you goldenboytim

This is really helpful

Thanks again