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Old 15-Oct-2004, 12:55
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I am a senior student and looking for a new job. Can someone help me with my cover letter and resume. Is it correct or somewhere to change?Thank you !


Jessica Guo
125 No.7 Building, 20 ChengZhong Road
200436

October 15,2004

Mr. Shi,
Floor 20th China shipping building, 1 PuDong Road
200120

Dear Mr. Shi,

I am writing in connection with the job of your company that advertised in the newspaper. I am interested in the position of administration assistant.

Citibank is a leading global commercial bank. You provide opportunity and challenge to a diverse world-class team of professionals. You reward people based on performance, using measurements that we aligned with our business objectives. You provide the tools for continuous training and development so employees have the opportunity to be fully effective in their jobs and develop long-term career.

I’d like to become a member of your company. I have graduated from Shanghai University. I major in International business and trade. I send my resume with it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours sincerely,
Jessica









Jessica Guo
Room 125 No.7 Building, 20 ChengZhong Road Shang Hai 200093
Home phone:69981014
Mobile phone: 13817791234
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Objectives:
Seeking administration assistant position in a multinational company.

Summary of Qualifications:
l Native Chinese speaker with a high proficiency level in English speaking, reading and writing
l CET 6
l Good communication with others
l Researched, wrote and presented 25 page Market Research report
l Computer literate: Microsoft office, FrontPage, Dream weaver, FoxPro


Education:
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) ShangHai University ShangHai

Post-Diploma of ShangHai University in International Economics and Trade, anticipated May 2005

Fifty-six High school ShangHai
Class of 1997, Diploma received June 2000

Relevant coursework:
l Marketing lFinancial Management
l Accounting l Organizational Behavior
l International Economy and Trade
l Management Information Systems

Experience:
Learning alliance Management Consulting Company ShangHai
Administrative Assistant. Responded to Client inquiries by telephone, drafted and typed correspondence. Aided in planning and organizing conferences. Summer 2002

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Teach a fifteen-year old girl English, especially English grammar and vocabulary. September 2003 to present
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Welcome

Resume and Cover Letter Examples: click here, and here, and here.

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I am writing in connection with the job of your company that advertised in the newspaper. I am interested in the position of administration assistant.


I am writing to apply for the position of Administration Assistant, advertised in XXXX.
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I have read some samples! Thank you Casiopea tdol!
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CET 6

If CET is your English qualification, shouldn't it be beside your statement about English level?
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