please help me with my cover letter and resume

Cover letter

Dear Manager of personnel department:

I am writing this letter to apply for the job of administrative assistant in you company.I will graduate with bachelor degree major in International Economic & Trade this summer. I have worked as a customer service trainee in your company in the summer of 2002. When I saw your advertising on the newspaper, I thought your company would be the best choice for me to begin my career.
My education has given me a lot of knowledge in the field of foreign international trade. As I work in your company before, my experience in your company would do much good to my future work. More addition, I get a high recommends from my senior manager during my work period. I have put my resume after my cover letter. I would be very appreciate that you could read it and reply me these days.

Yours sincerely,
CINDERELLA CHEN

Resume

CINDERELLA CHEN

Room 201, No. 47, 3288Lane, Yanggao Road
Shanghai, China 200125
Phone: (021)50780704 Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead


OBJECTIVE

A summer trainee for administrative assistant at Sunshine International Trade Company in Shanghai , China

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICICATIONS
l Interpersonal communication
l Computer literate: Microsoft Office, Windows XP Professional, Microsoft Project
l Native Chinese Speaker fluent in English: speaking, reading, writing
l Certificate of State College English Test-Band 4 (CET-4), June 2003.

EDUCATION

Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Shanghai University Shanghai, China
Post-Diploma of Shanghai University in International Economy and Trade. June 2005.
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC)Shanghai University Shanghai, China
Diploma of Shanghai University in International Trade. Certificate IV of Insearch in English. June 2003.

WORK EXPERIENCE

Beijing Sunshine International Trade Company in Shanghai
Customer Service Department Trainee
Process and copy documents, send e-mail and answer telephones. Type the Customs declaration. Go with the staffs to the Customs. Summer, 2002
Summer, 2004

[RonBee]

Say:

• Bachelor's degree

Don't say:

• foreign international trade

Say, simply:

• international trade

:)

Tank you for your help, I will correct it.

[Tdol]

Interpersonal communication

Do you have a qualification in this?

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by tdol

Interpersonal communication

Do you have a qualification in this?

I have been communicating interpersonally for years with varying degrees of success.

:wink:

[Tdol]

Have you got a certificate?
I'd say 'good interpersonal skills'.

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by tdol

Have you got a certificate?
I'd say 'good interpersonal skills'.

That works.