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Joyce Zhou
6-601 420 Meizhou Road Shanghai 200090
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2004.10.17.


Mr. Phillip Wang
Panasonic Appliance Shanghai LTD
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RE: Possible Employment

Dear Mr. Phillip Wang:
It was good talking with you again. As promised, I am enclosing a copy of my resume for your information. If any appropriate opportunities come to your attention, I would appreciate it if you would keep me in mind.

I am looking for a logistics position. I have got the certificate about the logistics and have some practical experience. I am particularly interested in an equity position. As indicated in my resume, I am fluent in English and familiarity with Shanghai.

After you have had chance to look over the resume, please give me a call. Maybe we can even plan to get together sometime soon. Thank you.

Best to your all.

Sincerely,
Joyce Zhou
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This is the resume:

Joyce Zhou
6-601 420 Meizhou Road Shanghai 200090
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Objective

To obtain a responsible and challenging position in logistics where my education and work experience will be of value


Education

International Business and Trade
SILC Institute
Shanghai University Sep 2002


Work Experience

Sywg Stock Exchange July 2004
Assistant Aug.2004

Shanghai University Sept 2004
Computer Laboratory Reception Present (part-time)


Computer Skills

Training in the following computer programs emphasizing the production of documents typically found in business and office applications:·Microsoft Word for Windows ·PPT ·Lotus 1-2-3 ·Access


Language Skills

CET-4


Award

First grade scholarship Sept.2003
First grade scholarship Sept.2004

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Dear Mr. Phillip Wang:

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Dear Mr Chang,