Thank you for helping Lisa with the resume and cover letter

Room 303 No.4 Lane280
Wenxi Road
Shanghai 200435

Hang Seng Bank Ltd. Shanghai Branch
11/F, China Development Bank Tower
500 Pudong South Road
Shanghai 200120

Dear Ms. Guan,

I’m interested in the position of sales representative of Hang Seng Bank Ltd. Shanghai Branch, which was advertised in the www.51job.com on 14, October, 2004.

I am a fresh man that will graduate from Shanghai University in June 2005, and I am interested in having a challenge job to apply my knowledge and prove my personal value. As we all know, Hang Seng Bank Ltd. is a famous bank in Hong Kong, in China, even in the world, so I am willing to become the member of your creative group.

I feel I am well qualified for this position. I really enjoy dealing with different people in different atmosphere. Although I am a new fresh man and lack of experience, I can fit the new environment quickly and have good relationship with colleagues and clients. The most important, I will try my best to do the job well—never give up if I have the objectives set. My resume enclosed giving details of my educations; relative stills and some working experience are also for your attention.

It would be grateful if you could give me an interview. My phone number is 13564688233.

Yours sincerely

Lisa Sheng

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LISA SHENG
Room 303 No.4 Lane 280 Wenxi Road
Shanghai, 200435
Mobile Phone: 13564688233
E-mail: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

Summary of Qualification
*Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: speaking, reading, writing
Relevant certificates:
1. State College English Test (CET) – Level 6, September 2003
2. State College English Test (CET) –Level 4, September 2002
*Computer literate: Microsoft Office, Windows XP professional, Dreamweaver, Flash, Fireworks
*Interpersonal Communication, key leadership role in Communist Youth League
*Be good at researching, writing and presenting marketing plan and business report both in Chinese and English

Education
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC), Shanghai University Shanghai China
Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade, July 2005. Received second prize scholarship in 2001-2002 semester.
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC), Shanghai University Shanghai China
Diploma in International Trade, July 2003.
Shibei High School, Shanghai China
Class 6 of 1997, Diploma received in June, 2000.

Work Experience
Municipal State-assets Administer Bureau of Zhabei District Shanghai, China
Administrative Assistant. Researched for some state-owned enterprise to get data information. Helped to make contract with property right representative of 6 state-owned enterprises. Responded to write official documents, arrange meetings and connect with other government organs. Summer, 2004

Charming Advertising Company, Shanghai China
Administrative Assistant. Responded to client inquiries in person and by telephone. Aided in planning and organizing conferences. Summer, 2003

Qiangsheng Automobile Ltd., Shanghai China
Engineer Assistant. Handled customer inquiries and complaints about their broken automobiles. Responded to make the list of customers’ claim for compensation. Summer, 2002

Qianjing Refresher Course Institute, Shanghai China
Chinese teacher. Taught two classes of 13-year-old students reading, analyzing and writing Chinese articles. 2002~2003

[Tdol]

which was advertised in the www.51job.com

Take out 'the'. I'd also use'on'.

Originally Posted by tdol

which was advertised in the www.51job.com

Take out 'the'. I'd also use'on'.

Thank you very much for your help :P

[Tdol]

It would be grateful if you could give me an interview. My phone number is 13564688233.


You give your phone in the resume, so I'd be tempted to leave it out here.