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Old 17-Oct-2004, 10:28
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Alicia MA

Room***, No.**, Xie Tu Road, Shanghai, China
139182*****, 6305****
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Objective
Professional or technical position in an International Company

Expertise/Summary of Qualifications
lGood interpersonal communication skills
lNative Chinese Speaker, Fluent English
lMS office ,MS PPT, MS Windows, internet skills
lMember of group in doing business report at university
lGood at affairs requiring patience, brainstorming and creative ability

Education
Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce (SILC) Shanghai, China
Shanghai University
Post-Diploma of international trade and economy. From 2001 to present

LiXin Accounting College Shanghai, China
Majored in Accounting and international trade. Form 2000 to 2001

Scholarships
Scholarship in senior XiNan Model School (middle school),
“Good Students Scholarship” in Shanghai Foreign Language School (Junior school)
Relevant course
ERP (Enterprise of resource plan) certificate 2004
Intermediate Oral interpretation, 2000-2001
IELTS Course, 2003
Experience

Shanghai General Motor Company (SGM) Shanghai, China
Buyer of purchasing department, From June 2004 to Sep 2004

Shanghai PY Software Guard Company Shanghai, China
Working in Propagate and plan department, Form June 2003 to Sep 2003

Shanghai Smert Service Center(SSSC) Shanghai, China
Secretary. Reorganization of information, collection of information, Form June 2002 to Sep. 2002

Financial company of Shanghai Auto Industry Company (SAIC) Shanghai, China
Credit and loan affairs, assist the accountant, computer processing. Communicated well with colleagues. Form June 2001 to Sep.2001


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Dear Sir or Madam:,
I am a student in Shanghai University; I will be graduate in the middle of 2005.

I saw the recruitment advertisement of your company from the newspaper last week. I want to get the buyer position that was mentioned in the newspaper.

As I know, the main business of your company is producing automobile. It is famous for your perfect products and long history. The experience of working in your company will become ones wealth in the life. What are learned in the company are not only the special knowledge but also plentiful experience. Therefore, working in your company is always a strong wish in my life.

I will graduate next year, so it welcomes my first job in my life. I will put all my enthusiasm into the job because I know what it is means to me. I must be loyal to the first company which help me grow up. I major in international trade and economy in university that was the same to what you acquire in you advisement. Besides this, I’ve ever practice in some international company. From the resume you can see I’ve worked in SGM as a buyer and get praise for my boss. Although I am a university student, I have many experience of society. I have skills of communicate with people, talk in English fluently, computer control and others. I think I will be the suitable person that your company is looking for.

If your company employed me, I definitely working hard for company, devote all the energy to my job. You will rejoice it is a correct choice to choose me!

Best wishes,



Alicia Ma
2004-10-17
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lGood interpersonal communication skills
| here looks strange.
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I mean "I have good relationship with people, I can communicate with others friendly in a good way"
do you understand me?If there is any mistake,please correct it for me.Thanks for your help!!!!!
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Shanghai General Motor Company (SGM) Shanghai, China
Buyer of purchasing department, From June 2004 to Sep 2004

I'd use 'Buyer for Purchasing Department', as you probably weren't the only one in such a large company.
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