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Old 17-Oct-2004, 12:53
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Dear Sir or Madam of Unilever:
I get the information from www.HRChina.com that your company will hire a group of Management Trainees. These trainees will get professional train in the future. I am very interested in the position. and believe that my education background is appropriate for the position.

I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are Marketing, Business Communication, Business English, Logistic Management and Objective Behavior. I get all A in these courses. So I think I can be competence for this position.

Enclosed is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my qualifications for the position.

I look forward to talking with you regarding the interview opportunities with you. Within the next week I will call you to answer any questions you may have.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,


Lily

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I don'tlike the way you start the letter:
I get the information from www.HRChina.com that your company will hire a group of Management Trainees.

You could say 'I have learned from www.HRChina.com

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