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| Your advertisement for a Management Trainee on the Internet interested me because the position that you described is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking. My name is Carrie. I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are international law, Marketing, International Trade, and Financial management. I know your company is a large multinational enterprise, and this job can give me plentiful experience. I will be honored to be a member of your company. Enclosed is a copy of my resume, in which is more fully details of my qualifications for the position. Thank you for reading. I look forward to receiving your return information. Sincerely yours, Carrie Zhou Enclosed Resume: Carrie Zhou Room 1006, No.3 Building, #1050 Zhangyang Road, Shanghai, China, 200122 Phone: (021)68766321 Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Objective Seeking a position in a large multinational company. Summary of Qualifications Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: Speaking, Reading, Writing Interpersonal Communication Skills High Responsibility CET-6 Computer Literate: Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office, Foxpro, Internet Research, HTML design, ERP Education Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Jia Ding district, SH Shanghai University Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade. Anticipated May, 2005 Relevant Coursework ERP(Enterprise of Resource Plan) course, Present CET-6 course, 2003 Experience Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002. |
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Also, I think it's better to place "Experience" immediately after the "Summary of Qualifications". |
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| Experience Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002. <<<< What else can you say about your experience at these places? I would include more information here. |
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| exactly like the kind of job I don't like this phrase-I'd say 'exactly the job'. |
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