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YanHong Hu
YangChangZhong Road.
200072

上海杰辰网络科技发展有限公司
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RE: Possible Employment

Letter of Application

Dear Sir/Madam

I wish to apply for the advertised position of sales assistant as posted on the internet (http://jobs.careerone.com.). Currently I have just finished my second year of study, studying for a diploma Engineering Practice at the Shanghai University.

My interests in sales are in consultancy such as sales management and also on-site marketing research. My hope in under taking the position to gain extensive practical knowledge and learn the skills-in-action of the roles and responsibilities of a salesperson.

My previous jobs affirm me that I am a team worker and have interpersonal skills. I am a hard worker, reliable and very determined. I adapt well in different environments and situations. I like to excel in everything I do therefore I pay close attention to details. I am also a self-starter. One of my passions is to start new things.

I understand that competition is strong. My hope is that my strong interest and enthusiasm for work within sales and my attributes mentioned above will give me the opportunity for a placement.

I can be contacted on my home telephone: 56651297, alternatively on my mobile number, 13041608225 or email:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead. Please do not hesitate to contact me. You’re thoughtful consideration is greatly appreciated.



Yours Faithfully,


YanHong Hu

Name: YanHong Hu
Address: Room 301, NO.6, Lane 519, YangChangZhong Road, Shanghai
Contacts: 56651297(home)
13041608225(mobile)
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Date of Birth: 12 March 1984


Education/Training:
2002- Present Diploma in Business and Commerce; Shanghai University

Work History:
2004.6-8 CTS Shanghai Private Overseas Affairs CO., LTD
• Marketing assistant
2003.1-2 Eastern Website Branch
•Secretary

Skills: Computer Skills:
• Windows 95/98/NT/XP
• Code in Visual Basic 6
• Experience with Microsoft Word, Excel, Power Point
Personal Skills:
• Interpersonal Skills
Languages:
• Fluent in Mandarin
• Have a good command of written and spoken English, passed CET-4, Ielts: 6.5
Scholarships:
2003.9 School First-class Scholarship for the first year


Interest:
Philosophy
Socialising with friends.
Chinese religion

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Currently I have just finished my second year of study,

'Currently' and 'just' don't work together here. Are you currently finishing or have you just finished?