Jean's resume

Cover letter
Return Address:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Date: October 18th 2004
Shanghai Haagen-Dazs CO.Ltd
RE: Possible Employment
Dear manager of Marketing,
On my graduation form college this fall, I am desirous of securing a position that will offer me opportunity in the field of import and export trading. By the way, I major in “Internation business” in college, in three years,I have learnt many subjects about marketing such as “Global Marketing” and “Basic Marketing”. Knowing something of the scope and enterprise of your huge marketing department in Haagen-Dazs Company, I thought perhaps you would keep me in mind for a possible opening.
I am nimble and albert, and worked very hard in previous part-time jobs. I shall be twenty-one years of age in November this year. As present I am a student in the college of——but I shall graduate from the college this coming July, finishing the requirements in three years. I have had no business experience, only have had some part-time jobs,but my college record has been good.
Dr. Weichang Qian, president of the college of——will be glad to tell you more about my character and ability, I shall be glad to call at any time for an interview.
Your sincerely
Jean

Resume
Personal information

English name: Jean Chinese name: Chen Xi
Sex: Female Date of birth: Nov 16st , 1983
Place of birth: Shanghai Telephone: (021) 59203628
Email address:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Marital Status: Unmarried

Education
2002.9—2005.6 International Business, SILC, Shanghai University
Academic Main Courses
College English, Business English, International Finance, International Management, Organizational Behavior, Accounting, Business Communication, Business Writing Report, Microeconomic, Macroeconomic, Global Marketing, International Business law, International Trade, Data Base, etc
Work experience
2004.6-2004.8 Worked in Shanghai Government.
worked in financial department
Computer Abilities:
Skilled in use of Win 2000/XP, Office2003, Frontpage, Photoshop, Auto CAD, Basic programme
English Skills
Have a good command of both spoken and written
Other:
Enjoy facing challenges and risk. Aggressive, independent and be able to work under a dynamic environment. Have coordination skills, teamwork spirit. Social ability is my strength.

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Dear manager of Marketing,

Dear Sir or Madam (put the Marketing Manager position in the address)

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Marital Status: Unmarried

I'd use 'Single'. However,others might disagree- I'll wait to see. In British English, 'unmarried' sounds a bit strange- negative.