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Old 18-Oct-2004, 12:17
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English name: Summer Chinese name: Gu Xiaping
Sex: Female Date of birth: July 23,1983
Place of birth: Shanghai Telephone: (021) 58142586
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Receptionist
Education
2002.9—2005.7 International Trades, Shanghai University
Academic Main Courses
International Trade Theory, International Business, Organization Behavior, Basic Marketing, Global Marketing and so on
Skills
Computer
Generally skilled in operation of MS Windows & Office.
English
Past CET-4. Have a good command of written and read English.
Work experience
Summer in 2004 Worked in Shanghai Jing Kuang Corporation.
Qualifications
General Trade Knowledge and English Skills
Have a passion to work and do my best to my job

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Dear Teacher Chen:
Are you searching for a receptionist who can deal with some problems and give other’s help?
I major in international Trade in Shanghai University. English studies my profession. Our Most of our teachers use English to teach us lessons, which improves my English at my university. And, I passed CET-4 during my study. So, I think I can use English with no problem.
I am a open-minded girl and can get well along with others. At the same time, I am also willing to help others who are in trouble. Whenever they meet with problems, I will treat them warmly and help them to solve it.
I have studied in some IELTS Learning Center, so I have knowledge and some information about IELTS learning. I believe I can do well in my position, even if I have no experience of this kind of jobs.
The enclosed resume outlines my specific information and accomplishments in greater details. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

Sincerely,
Gu Xiaping (Summer)
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Dear Teacher Chen:

We wouldn't use 'Teacher'as a titlein English; useMr\Ms, etc. We use Doctor and Professor as titles.
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I would add some of the things you did in "Work Experience".

I don't think its a good idea to begin a cover letter with a question.

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