cover letter and resume

To Epson HR manager:
Dear Sir or Madam:
The accompanying resume is in response to the job that you may give me.
I have visited your web site, and I’m very interested in your company. I would like to apply for any position in your company.
I am a student of Shanghai University now, and I will graduate with a Bachelor of economic degree from Shanghai University in Shanghai, China next year. I took holiday jobs during almost all my summer holidays. I had been a waitress at McDonald’s, a management assistant at MeiLiHua Ltd.co., and an sales assistant at Shanghai Tuohe import & export Ltd.co..
I hope to become a member of yours because the working condition and surrounding are excellent, all conductive to the further development of my abilities. I think my qualifications and experience perfectly match what you are looking for. 　It would be so appreciate if I can get your reply as soon as possible ,if you still need any other documents and have any problems , please no hesitate to contact me.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely of Yours,
Daly Chen
(signature)
2004/10/17











Resume

Daly Chen

Personal Information
1906/3/342 Yinshan St., Shanghai China
E-mail address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
Mobile phone: 13386245862
Home number: 021-50718092

Education
2000/09-2003/07 Major in International Trade and Out standing English
Diploma degree
Sydney Institutes of Language and Commerce
Shanghai University. P.R. China
2003/09-now Major in International Economic and Trade and Out standing English
Bachelor degree
Sydney Institutes of Language and Commerce
Shanghai University. P.R. China
2003/09-now Major in finance
Bachelor degree
Net Education Commerce
Shanghai Jiaotong University. P.R. China

Honors
Win 2000-2001 “first class scholarship” of Shanghai University
Win 2003-2004 “second class scholarship” of Shanghai University
”Great dormitory”, pass Cet4 and Cet6
Other trainings
2000-2001 Computer course (Dream weaver, Windows, Visual basic, Office 2000)
Business English (self study)
Typing course (280-310k/m)
2001-2002 Basic French (study in Shanghai foreign language university)
2001-now Japanese
2003 Accounting
Employment
2002/06-2002/08 Management Assistant of Mei Li Hua Ltd.Co.
2003/07-2003/08 Waitress Of McDonald’s
2004/08 Sales Assistant Of TUOHE Import & Export
Ltd.Co.

Other skills
Fluent in Mandarin, Oral English, and business English
Fast learning.
Hard working
French and Japanese
High suitable ability to new environment
Good teamwork

[blacknomi]

Other skills
Fluent in Mandarin, Oral English, and business English

If you are a native speaker of Mandarin, I suggest leaving out the "fluent in Mandarin."


It seems like a dancer is applying for a dance teacher.

Other skill
1.Dance
2.
3. :D

[Tdol]

French and Japanese are listed away from English and no indication of level is given.

[blacknomi]

Very thoughtful!

[twostep]

Originally Posted by blacknomi

Very thoughtful!

Please check your spelling especially caps. Avoid words such as would/should. Oral English?

[blacknomi]

Huh?
Okay, I'll try to tell the poster, daly_juliet. :D