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Old 19-Oct-2004, 03:27
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Name:Cash Zhang
Student code: 02320570
Room 218, No 7, 20 ChengZhong Road
Shanghai P.R. China
Postcode: 201800
Telephone: 69981039
Mobile: 13774236677
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Date: 16/10/2004
Job I want: Assistant Marketing Manager (Marketing Group)
Company information: Shanghai Volkswagen Automotive Co. Ltd
Address: Luo Pu Road Anting Shanghai 201805 China
Post code: 201805
Telephone: (021)59577275
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Dear Sir:
Thanks for reading my self-recommend letter from your busying hour first. My name is Cash.According to the advertisement ,your position requires in marketing department in Shanghai volkswagen company. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from silc business collage of Shanghai university this year with a international trade degree. My studies have included courses in international trade, marketing, international business and other management ability like H&R business communication in business.
During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-4, but more important I am processing CET-6 and can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question. I also have half years of marketing experience, during this summer holiday I work in a auto glass company in marketing department. I am confident that my combination of practical work experience and solid educational experience has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. I understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the marketing field.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

Resume
Room 218, No 7, 20 ChengZhong Road
Shanghai P.R. China
Postcode: 201800
Telephone: 69981039
Career Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a assistant marketing manager with an emphasis in marketing design and research.
Education
2002.9-2005.6 Dept.of international business Graduate School of Shanghai University
Academic Main Courses
Mathematics
Advanced Mathematics Probability and Statistics Linear Algebra
Marketing
Global Marketing 3/e
Accounting
Microeconomics
Macroeconomics
Organizational behavior
International business
Abilitees
Skilled in business management and business communication and marketing planning.
English Skills
Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Past CET-4
Qualifications
General business knowledge relating to financial, healthcare
Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense
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See my comment here about your first sentence:
http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/vi...?p=44667#44667
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See my comment here about your first sentence:
http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/vi...?p=44667#44667

Mr Richard
Thank you for your help in my resumes. I'v changed in my letter. :D
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OK, Cash, now 'My name is Cash'. Is there any need for you name in the letter? I can get your name from the bottom of the letter.

PS- It's Richard, not Mister Richard- don't use titles with first names.
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HA...
Than I have knew.
Because I am a Chinese student so sometimes...maybe..."Chinglish"
Thank u Richard
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Hi, Richard! :D :D

Welcome back, $$Cash$$
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