my Cover letter and resume

Nicholas Zhu
Address: Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 Cheng Zhong Street, Jia Ding District
Shanghai ,China,19 October 2004
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Object: Find a job in HSBC
Human resource manager: Zhang Wei
Company Address: G/F, HSBC Tower,
200120,101 Ying Cheng East Road, Pu Dong, Shanghai Telephone:[86] (21)6841 1888

Dear Miss Zhang:
Good day!. I am very sorry to occupy your time. Let me introduce myself first. My name is Nicholas Zhu.
I am a student in Shanghai University. In this letter, I am going to apply a job in your company.
As we know, HSBC is a big company which have many branches all over the world. This kind of company need the people who can communicate with both local Chinese people and Foreign customer. I am in Silc, a college which teach in western way. As a result, I am a mix-culture people who is competent for your job.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Nicholas Zhu

RESUME
Nicholas Zhu Chinese Name: Zhu Zhen Lin
Address: Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 Cheng Zhong Street, Jia Ding District
Shanghai ,China,19 October 2004
Human resource manager: Zhang Wei
Company Address: G/F, HSBC Tower,
200120,101 Ying Cheng East Road, Pu Dong, Shanghai Telephone:[86] (21)6841 1888
EDUCATION
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai university

RELEVANT COURSE
Office 2000
Microeconomics / Macroeconomics
Financial Accounting
Global Finance
International Business
International Business Law
International Commercial Law
Money and Banking
Global Marketing
Organization Behavior
Financial Accounting

WORK EXPERIENCE
International Business Assistant in a trading company
I can speak a little Spanish.

Personal ability
CET4 certificated CET6 certificated
Elementary computer level certificated

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