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Old 19-Oct-2004, 07:48
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Jimmy

October 19,2004
Room 222 Building 7, 20 Chengzhong Road
Shanghai University
Shanghai, China 201800
Tel: 86-21-69981035
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Marketing Manager
Haier
1 Haier Road
Qingdao, China 266103
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Dear Miss Liu:
I was glad to know that your company willing to find a maketing manager on your company's website. I feel that the job is the one I'm looking for for a long time, I'm very interested in it.

My name is Chen Wei, an open-minded boy of 21 years old stuedying in the Shanghai University. I will complete my International Trad subject with all the confidence, knowledge and capability next year. I have learn lots of Marketing knowladge. My subject is teaching by foreign teachers, so my English improved deeply during my studying. I think I can slove the English problem or talk to foreign business people in no difficulty.

Thank you for your consideration. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

Yours sincerely,
Jimmy Chen



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English name: Jimmy
Chinese name: Chen wei
Date of birth: June 21, 1984
Place of birth: Shanghai Telephone: (021)66371322
Marital Status: unmarried
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Academic Main Courses:
International Business, Marketing, International Trade,Organization Behavior,Global Marketing

Education:
2002.9-2005.7 International Trade, Shanghai University

Work Experience:
Summer of 2004 Work in Shanghai Shengyi Company

Skills:
Past CET-4
Be good at typing
Generally skilled in operation of MS Windows & Office


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I'm - never use contractions in formal writing.

open-minded boy of 21 years old stuedying

Boy????? Delete this immediately.
stuedying - a spell check would eliminate this kind of mistake. You mustn't make spelling mistakes in a letter of such importance.

I wouldn'tinclude my age in the letter.
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