resume and cover letter by afra

Zhu Jingbo
PEOSONAL INFORMATION
Room 101, Wu Song San Cun No.42,
Bao Shan, Shanghai, 200940
Home phone 02156842237
Mobile phone 13916808361

EDUCATION
2000-2005 International Trade, English Business, English,
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce,
Shanghai University, Shanghai, China
2000—2001 Scholarship

OTHER TRAINING
2000-2001 Public French, Shanghai International Studies Uniersity
2002-2003 Dreamweaver,Fireworks,Flash,andVB,Shanghai University

EMPLOYMENT
2002.6-2002.8 Hangzhou Mary Kay Co. Ltd
11th Floor, Jiushi Renaissance Mansion,
No.918 Huaihai Road(M)
Shanghai 200020, China
Custioner’s Assiatant, connecting with customers about
After-sale service
OTHER SKILL
Driver licence I got the driver licence in 2002
Computer I can deal with Word, Excel, Powerpoint proficiently



Room 101, Wu Song San Cun No.42,
Bao Shan, Shanghai, 200940, China

Philips Electric Co.,Ltd
No.002-027 Post Letterbox
200002

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am interested in the position of Marketing Assistant of your company, which is published on your 51job website.
I am a student from Shanghai University, Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, and will be graduated in June 2005. I major in International Economic and Business. We know Philips is a world famous electric company. I think it must be exciting when working in such company. And I think I meet the command your require.
Thanks for your reading and I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely
Afra

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think it must be exciting when working in such company.

This sentence doesn't work. 'Exciting' is not formal enough.