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Old 20-Oct-2004, 14:48
Nichulas Zhu
 
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Default cover letter and resume(I have posted once, thename is guest

(To Martin:
I have posted this once in Tuesday. At taht time my name is Guest, so i will posted it again
Ps: Hope you will recover from the disease~~~
God bless you~~~`)



Nicholas Zhu
Address: Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 Cheng Zhong Street, Jia Ding District
Shanghai ,China,19 October 2004
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Object: Find a job in HSBC
Human resource manager: Zhang Wei
Company Address: G/F, HSBC Tower,
200120,101 Ying Cheng East Road, Pu Dong, Shanghai Telephone:[86] (21)6841 1888

Dear Miss Zhang:
Good morning!. I am very sorry to occupy your time. Let me introduce myself first. My name is Nicholas Zhu.
I am a student in Shanghai University. In this letter, I am going to apply a job in your company.
As we know, HSBC is a big company which have many branches all over the world. This kind of company need the people who can communicate with both local Chinese people and Foreign customer. I am in Silc, a college which teach in western way. As a result, I am a mix-culture people who is competent for your job.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Nicholas Zhu

RESUME
Nicholas Zhu Chinese Name: Zhu Zhen Lin
Address: Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 Cheng Zhong Street, Jia Ding District
Shanghai ,China,19 October 2004
Human resource manager: Zhang Wei
Company Address: G/F, HSBC Tower,
200120,101 Ying Cheng East Road, Pu Dong, Shanghai Telephone:[86] (21)6841 1888
EDUCATION
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai university

RELEVANT COURSE
Office 2000
Microeconomics / Macroeconomics
Financial Accounting
Global Finance
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International Business Law
International Commercial Law
Money and Banking
Global Marketing
Organization Behavior
Financial Accounting

WORK EXPERIENCE
International Business Assistant in a trading company
I can speak a little Spanish.

Personal ability
CET4 certificated CET6 certificated
Elementary computer level certificated
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Good morning!. I am very sorry to occupy your time. Let me introduce myself first. My name is Nicholas Zhu.

1 Never start a letter like this and don't use exclamation marks in formal writing
2 Don't start by apologising; itsets the wrong tone.
3This sounds like spoken English.
4Actually, your first name is 'Nicholas'.
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