Filling Job application form

[linux44]

hello
i am applying for job and i find it difficult to answer these question
please tell me where i am wrong and i will appreciate any sugestion

1.Why do you wish to be involved in the Impact Mentoring Scheme?

I am very interested in the position, as the role relates directly to my qualifications and career intentions. It also is a good opportunity for me to improve my communication and team working skills. I have learned and passed some high level industry qualification such as MCSE and CCNA via self guided publish and internet source. I worked as a team leader in my university project which was aimed to research and implement a new business plan for company called FRED’s dance school. My role was to motivate, coordinate and support a team of 6 members as well as involved recording agendas, action plans and all other key information on dedicated file.

2.What do you hope to gain from your participation in the scheme?

Experienced in all aspect of working in the friendly environment and trained in building more effective relationships. Knowledge of Dealing and overcoming problems as well as getting jobs done under pressure by the deadline.
What have you already done to find out about these occupations?


3.What have you already done to find out about these occupations?
i dont know what to write ,i have found these job on the internet ,would it be enough to just write over the internet ?




thanks
appriciate ur help

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by linux44

I have learned and passed some high level industry qualification such as MCSE and CCNA via self guided publish and internet source. I worked as a team leader in my university project which was aimed to research and implement a new business plan for company called FRED’s dance school. My role was to motivate, coordinate and support a team of 6 members as well as involved recording agendas, action plans and all other key information on dedicated file.

This is what most needs to be reworked. Make better choices with your words with the intention of making it clear what you are trying to say. Simplify.