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Old 24-Oct-2004, 07:02
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COVER LETTER

Dear Sir,

I am write to you for applying for the job of Analyst.

I will graduate from Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce, (SILC), Shanghai University, major in Marketing, Acounting, International economic & trade.

I am always interested in investment & risk managment, and desire to involoving in this field.

Goldman Sachs is a world-famous leading global investment banking, securities and investment management group. Offering career opportunities for students just graduate from university, and suggesting to be an Analyst as a start.

I have finish the web test 'WHERE DO I FIT IN' , and it sugget me that Credit Risk Management and Advisory, Fixed Income, Currency and Commodities and Goldman Sachs Asset Management area I can consider. As Analyst is one of Fixed Income, Currency and Commodities, now I write to apply with my resume as follow.

I am sure that I can do the job well and improve myself well, if you give me a chance to be your staff.

I am looking for your reply. Thank you very much.



Yours faithfully

Chris Shen



RUSUME

Chris Shen


Personal Information:

ADD: Room XXX, Building XX, XXX Road,
Changning District, Shanghai, China
200051
HT :
MT :
EMAIL: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

Objective


Summary of Qualifications

 Good communication skills in interpreted, presented and negoatiated.
 Fluency in English and know a little of Japanese.
 Full of energy to work independent and have organizational skills.
 Good computer skills in Windows and Office, HTML, E-Business.
 Working experiences in sales and marketing.

Education

 Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce, (SILC), Shanghai University. Jiading District
 Graduate from the university and get Bachelor of Economy in International Economic & Trade department, July, 2005.
 Major in Marketing, Acounting,Organizion Behavior,Internationa economic & trade and computer operate.

 Study Internediate Course of Interpretation in Jiao Tong University.
 Study Japanese language course in Foreign Language University.


Experience

 Translate artiles for the magizine “GOLDEN CARDS” as a partime job.
 Trainer in finance department in Changhai CO. QIANGSHENG GROUP in 2002



I also have some questions to ask, thank you!

If the company have the apply online system, should we only apply online or apply for the job in both ways just as apply online and EMAIL?

As a Chinese, If I apply for a foreign company only in English without Chinese resume, should I also write my Chinese name and pingyin in personal information area?

If the company offer online test, should I send the result of my testing to them, when I apply?

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I am wirte to you for applying for the job of Analyst.

wirte????


I am writing to apply for the job of Analyst.

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I am wirte to you for applying for the job of Analyst.

wirte????


I am writing to apply for the job of Analyst.



Thank you sir~
I have corrected it.

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I write 'part-time' with a hyphen because it looks nicer.
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Originally Posted by Chris_shen
COVER LETTER

Dear Sir,

I am write to you for applying for the job of Analyst.

I will graduate from Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce, (SILC), Shanghai University, major in Marketing, Acounting, International economic & trade.

I am always interested in investment & risk managment, and desire to involoving in this field.

Goldman Sachs is a world-famous leading global investment banking, securities and investment management group. Offering career opportunities for students just graduate from university, and suggesting to be an Analyst as a start.

I have finish the web test 'WHERE DO I FIT IN' , and it sugget me that Credit Risk Management and Advisory, Fixed Income, Currency and Commodities and Goldman Sachs Asset Management area I can consider. As Analyst is one of Fixed Income, Currency and Commodities, now I write to apply with my resume as follow.

I am sure that I can do the job well and improve myself well, if you give me a chance to be your staff.

I am looking for your reply. Thank you very much.



Yours faithfully

Chris Shen



RUSUME

Chris Shen


Personal Information:

ADD: Room 404, Building 24, Wanhangdu Road,
Changning District, Shanghai, China
200051
HT : 13817909386
MT : 86-21-62597124
EMAIL: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

Objective


Summary of Qualifications

 Good communication skills in interpreted, presented and negoatiated.
 Fluency in English and know a little of Japanese.
 Full of energy to work independent and have organizational skills.
 Good computer skills in Windows and Office, HTML, E-Business.
 Working experiences in sales and marketing.

Education

 Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce, (SILC), Shanghai University. Jiading District
 Graduate from the university and get Bachelor of Economy in International Economic & Trade department, July, 2005.
 Major in Marketing, Acounting,Organizion Behavior,Internationa economic & trade and computer operate.

 Study Internediate Course of Interpretation in Jiao Tong University.
 Study Japanese language course in Foreign Language University.


Experience

 Translate artiles for the magizine “GOLDEN CARDS” as a partime job.
 Trainer in finance department in Changhai CO. QIANGSHENG GROUP in 2002



I also have some questions to ask, thank you!

If the company have the apply online system, should we only apply online or apply for the job in both ways just as apply online and EMAIL? They use your on-line application only.

As a Chinese, If I apply for a foreign company only in English without Chinese resume, should I also write my Chinese name and pingyin in personal information area?

If the company offer online test, should I send the result of my testing to them, when I apply?
Keep a copy for your records they use the on-line version only.

Please go over the highlighted areas and doble check for grammar, typo and context.
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