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| lingshan 708 road Shanghai,China 200134 October15,2004 Box1-18 human resource department Hubin 222 road Shanghai, China 200021 Dear sir : Are you currently seeking a salesman to join your organization? If so, I would like to apply for the position. Bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am good at. According to the advertisement ,your position requires top university, and having the passion in working . I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Shanghai University next year . My major is the international trade. I understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the field. My education background will provide your need. During my education, I have passed CET-4, I can communicate with others freely in English and have the skilled knowledge at operating the computer. Finally, thank you for your attention to this matter. Please call me at 13916620657 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs. I look forward to meeting you then. With many thanks Ice lu RESUME Room 601Building02 Lingshan708 rode Shanghai 200134 (021) 68552783 Email:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Ice lu (lujun) Objective To obtain a challenging position as a salesman with communicate skill in English Education 2002.9-2005.9 Dept.of international trade,Shanghai University Academic Main Courses bussiness microeconomic Business law Organization behavior macroeconomic International finanical Basic / global marketing International law International trade english Basic college english (1-3) Business speaking english IELTS Business writing english Business reading english Computer And English Abilitees communicate with others freely in English. write and speak English is out of question. Skilled use of office XP , accurate typing at 60 WPM Qualifications· Full of passion to work · Know of the busines very well |
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| Are you currently seeking a salesman to join your organization? Don't you know? This style sounds too much like speech to me. I wouldn't start a letter with a direct question. State your purpose. Remember that you cannot hear the answer to the question, so my advice would be not to ask it. |
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