please check this CV

[GhettoNerd]

Hello everyone. Would someone be so kind to check this CV? :)

Some annotations:

1. I am not sure about the format. Please better check the attached Word document.
2. Do I have to write a description of the company at "experience"?

Curriculum Vitae


Name XXX
Address XXXweg 44
12351 Berlin
Tel. 000
E-mail address EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
Date of birth 08.12.1982
Place of birthBerlin
Nationality XXX

Profile


A well organised, reliable individual with proven customer service skills; a very good communicator who enjoys working as part of a team and is keen to find a position.

Experience

24.07.2006 – 02.08.2006 SmileTravel GmbH
Guide
Contact person for the teenagers on the journey
Organising events for the teenagers.

01.07.2006 – 30.09.2006 LMTS Reisecenter GmbH
Data entry operator
Entering Data into the system with good accuracy level.

20.11.2006 – 30.04.2007 B & G Motorräder GmbH
Ebay Seller
Taking photos of motorcycle parts.
The listing of the items.
Packing of the goods.

Education

August 2006 – Juli 2008 Friedrich-List-Schule, Oberstufenzentrum Wirtschaftssprachen, Graduation: state-qualified foreign language correspondence clerk
August 1995 – Juli 2004 Clay-Oberschule
Graduation: A-Levels
August 1989 – Juni 1995 Oskar–Heinroth-Grundschule
basic education

Language Skills

English fluent
Spanish average
French basic

Other Skills

IT Skills Windows, Linux, Mac OS X Leopard, MS Office, Open Office, internet research, HTML
Driving License Motorcycle (1998) Car (2000)

Interests

Sports, Computer, Internet, Friends

REFERENCES

References available upon request.

Berlin, 21.10.2008

[GhettoNerd]

here is the file

[Anglika]

Text and layout look fine.

You do not need to expand on the companies. An interviewer may ask you for more information, but the company names seem self-explanatory.