pls help me out to fix my mitivation letter...pick out the mistakes n flaws pls

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Without even starting to read this letter, I can tell you that the first and big mistake is the fact that you have no paragraphs. It makes it very difficult to read. The colour of the letters is also hard on the eyes.

Please edit it into at least 3 or 4 paragraphs and then ask for help again.

I am not a teacher.

yeah ur right... i didnt do the editing well thnks anyway

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Originally Posted by yuliya8701

yeah ur right... i didnt do the editing well thnks anyway

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This is called "using English" forum, not a beginner's course in texting.
Yes, you are right, I didn't do the editing well. Thanks anyway.

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Yes, you're right, I didn't do the editing. Well, thanks anyway.