starting of a presentation

Mannkavi said:

Hello, I want to know whether this is the right way to start my presentation. Is there any grammatical mistake in this?


"I would like to present the project work done by me during industrial training semester.
I have done my industrial training at one of the largest tractor manufacturing company
It not only manufacture tractors there are many other product manufactured by this company."

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fivejedjon said:

Try to give your thread a good title; people will see the title and decide whether to open it and read it or not.

Help! or Urgent Help Required!!!!!!
These are not good titles; they give no idea of what the thread is about.

Starting a presentation
This title is clear and people will instantly know what the thread is about. Try to include the theme or topic of the thread in the title. If you include keywords in the title, the forum software will automatically display threads with th same keywords at the bottom of the page, so you will be able to see other discussions on similar topics.

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engr.yasir ali bhatti said:

I would like to present the project work done by me during industrial training semester.
I have done my industrial training at one of the largest tractor manufacturing company
It not only manufacture tractors there are many other product manufactured by this company."

Good Morning/ Good Afternoon
The project which is represented by me during my Industrial training in one the largest Tractor manufacturing company. other product expect tractors are manufactured by this company.
thanks
(I am also learner dear but I believe on efforts)

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engr.yasir ali bhatti said:

I would like to present the project work done by me during my industrial training semester.
I have done my industrial training at one of the largest tractor manufacturing compan[STRIKE]y[/STRIKE]ies in this country? the world?
It not only manufactures tractors, but also many other products. [STRIKE]there are many other product manufactured by this company."[/STRIKE]

Good Morning/ Good Afternoon
[STRIKE]The project which is represented by me during my Industrial training in one the largest Tractor manufacturing company. other product expect tractors are manufactured by this company.
thanks [/STRIKE]
(I am also learner dear but I believe on efforts)

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engr.yasir ali bhatti said:

Sir you removed all my efforts. It was University Presentation not like country level presentation.:shock:

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