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Member
- Joined
- Oct 3, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
I wrote a message to my landlord. Could you help me check it to make it natural? Thank you.
March 7, 2013
Dear Mrs. XXX,
I am writing to bring you attention to the problem that the telephone in your apartment did not work when I intended to use it after I moved into the house. I hope you can repair it as soon as possible. I am free tomorrow. Please inform me of your repairing in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Jane
March 7, 2013
Dear Mrs. XXX,
I am writing to bring you attention to the problem that the telephone in your apartment did not work when I intended to use it after I moved into the house. I hope you can repair it as soon as possible. I am free tomorrow. Please inform me of your repairing in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Jane