gauri_agr
Member
- Joined
- Jan 19, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hindi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- United States
Hi All,
Please let me know the grammar and good sentence structure in the following passage
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One day I realized that I am able to talk uninterruptedly to my husband after his returning from his work. Otherwise my six year old son does not let us talk even for a minute. He keeps asking so many questions while we converge. I surprisingly looked for him everywhere. He was hidden in a walking closet and playing some game on my husband’s mobile. I was shocked that he was less interested to have his dad home after work rather he wanted him home to play on his mobile. Where will be the bondage then between them?
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Please let me know the grammar and good sentence structure in the following passage
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One day I realized that I am able to talk uninterruptedly to my husband after his returning from his work. Otherwise my six year old son does not let us talk even for a minute. He keeps asking so many questions while we converge. I surprisingly looked for him everywhere. He was hidden in a walking closet and playing some game on my husband’s mobile. I was shocked that he was less interested to have his dad home after work rather he wanted him home to play on his mobile. Where will be the bondage then between them?
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