thedaffodils
Key Member
- Joined
- Apr 26, 2008
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
ABC is a to-be American supervisor of mine. The following email has been sent to him, but I hope someone else could proofread it for me and let me know if any grammatical errors or etiquette solecisms in my writing, so that I can improve next time.
Many thanks!
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Hello ABC,
Thank you for your message. It was a pleasure to dine with you, and to discuss my job last Saturday. The Thai food was nice.
The info. about the agenda of *** people, and the outline of my job are very helpful. I'll review the drawings soon, and let you know if I have any questions.
As to the meetings with Mike both at the Hotel this Saturday, and at our factory on August 31, They are fine. I am flexible about the timing slots and places for the upcoming meetings. Could you please let me know Mike's last name? I hope to address him properly during our very first meeting.
I have had your contacts. And I have added your Skype ID on my Skype messager. Mine is ****
I quite appreciate the time and efforts you have taken for preparing training me, and trying to let me adapt to ****asap.
Have a great week! Thank you!
Best regards,
TD
Many thanks!
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Hello ABC,
Thank you for your message. It was a pleasure to dine with you, and to discuss my job last Saturday. The Thai food was nice.
The info. about the agenda of *** people, and the outline of my job are very helpful. I'll review the drawings soon, and let you know if I have any questions.
As to the meetings with Mike both at the Hotel this Saturday, and at our factory on August 31, They are fine. I am flexible about the timing slots and places for the upcoming meetings. Could you please let me know Mike's last name? I hope to address him properly during our very first meeting.
I have had your contacts. And I have added your Skype ID on my Skype messager. Mine is ****
I quite appreciate the time and efforts you have taken for preparing training me, and trying to let me adapt to ****asap.
Have a great week! Thank you!
Best regards,
TD