[Grammar] the role of technology

[rainous]

The role of technology is to become a vehicle on which services can be provided.

Does the underlined part sound OK in the sentence? It sounds a bit wordy to me.

or would there be a better way to phrase it?

Thank you.

 

[Tdol]

How about platform?

 

[emsr2d2]

The role of technology is to become a vehicle on which services can be provided.

Does the underlined part sound OK in the sentence? It sounds a bit wordy to me.

or would there be a better way to phrase it?

Thank you.

I agree that platform would be better.

The role of technology is to be a platform from which services can be provided.