learning54
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Hi Teachers,
I've written this paragraph. Could you help me correct it, please?
Arthur, Deborah’s husband, got up really early this morning. He got up at six thirty because he wanted to take the eight o’clock train to London. Unfortunately, when he arrived at the train station the train wasn’t there. Arthur was puzzled, so he told the station attendant, “ Where's the train? It’s only seven fifty-five and it always leaves at eight”. The station attendant said, "The train left at eight sharp. It's now five after eight. Your watch is ten minutes slow."
Thanks in advance
I've written this paragraph. Could you help me correct it, please?
Arthur, Deborah’s husband, got up really early this morning. He got up at six thirty because he wanted to take the eight o’clock train to London. Unfortunately, when he arrived at the train station the train wasn’t there. Arthur was puzzled, so he told the station attendant, “ Where's the train? It’s only seven fifty-five and it always leaves at eight”. The station attendant said, "The train left at eight sharp. It's now five after eight. Your watch is ten minutes slow."
Thanks in advance