dj_dipuu
Member
- Joined
- Oct 21, 2011
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Punjabi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- India
Hi ,
I have a BBC compacta grammer and I have to edit the following paragraphs and make correction. I just want to make sure If I have done it correctly ? I'll write corrections with red font in brackets . There is error in each line .. P.S there is only one error in each line.
1) It is impossible to understood (Understand) generation
next or to tackle us(them). All that elders
do is just keep (Keeping) quite and close their
eyes. And ( and with out period) is it right on their part
to doing (do) so ? Teenagers are very
confident on (at) what they do and
which(what) they want to do. They
think them to be ( we'll remove be) independent.
2) "So you want other(another) day off",
shouted the officer manager on (at) his clerk
I'm anxious to hear which (what) excuse you
have now. You have went(gone) for
yours (your) grandfather's funeral twice.
already". A clerk smiled sheepishly ( didn't see any mistake )
and said,"Today mine(my) grandmother
was (is) getting married again".
3) Three is an importance(important) number in
geometry. A triangle is an (the) strongest
form on (of ) construction. A Triangle
form the base of (for) three dimensional
Pyramid. It is considered the more(most)
stable and (the) strongest of each
shapes (shape). Triangles has innumerable
uses in science and everyday lives(life).
4) The concern about global warming has(is)
not that it's happening, and that (didn't find error)
its (it's) being hastened by modern man.
It is also occurring at a far great (didn't find error)
rate then(than) the natural evolutionary.
process. We are cut (cutting) down trees,
forcing the extinction of much(most)
species and polluted (polluting) the environment.
5) A 25 Million year old fossil have(has)
revealed that a predecessor to Australia's (Australian's)
iconic hopping Kangaroo once gallops (didn't find error)
on each fours(four), had dog like
fangs and possible(possibly) climed trees,
scientists have reporting (reported)
Uff so much of typing ! thanks for your help in advance
I have a BBC compacta grammer and I have to edit the following paragraphs and make correction. I just want to make sure If I have done it correctly ? I'll write corrections with red font in brackets . There is error in each line .. P.S there is only one error in each line.
1) It is impossible to understood (Understand) generation
next or to tackle us(them). All that elders
do is just keep (Keeping) quite and close their
eyes. And ( and with out period) is it right on their part
to doing (do) so ? Teenagers are very
confident on (at) what they do and
which(what) they want to do. They
think them to be ( we'll remove be) independent.
2) "So you want other(another) day off",
shouted the officer manager on (at) his clerk
I'm anxious to hear which (what) excuse you
have now. You have went(gone) for
yours (your) grandfather's funeral twice.
already". A clerk smiled sheepishly ( didn't see any mistake )
and said,"Today mine(my) grandmother
was (is) getting married again".
3) Three is an importance(important) number in
geometry. A triangle is an (the) strongest
form on (of ) construction. A Triangle
form the base of (for) three dimensional
Pyramid. It is considered the more(most)
stable and (the) strongest of each
shapes (shape). Triangles has innumerable
uses in science and everyday lives(life).
4) The concern about global warming has(is)
not that it's happening, and that (didn't find error)
its (it's) being hastened by modern man.
It is also occurring at a far great (didn't find error)
rate then(than) the natural evolutionary.
process. We are cut (cutting) down trees,
forcing the extinction of much(most)
species and polluted (polluting) the environment.
5) A 25 Million year old fossil have(has)
revealed that a predecessor to Australia's (Australian's)
iconic hopping Kangaroo once gallops (didn't find error)
on each fours(four), had dog like
fangs and possible(possibly) climed trees,
scientists have reporting (reported)
Uff so much of typing ! thanks for your help in advance