Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please check the following paragraph. Thanks a lot.
Last night, I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman was the gorilla’s friend. One day, she took the gorilla, Andy, to America. She sent Andy in a special zoo, but he didn’t like the zoo. Then, some hunters tried to kill him. Later, Andy escaped from the zoo and ran away. In the end, the woman heard the news and found Andy, then stopped the hunters. Andy was so lucky that he have a friend that could save him like that.
Last night, I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman was the gorilla’s friend. One day, she took the gorilla, Andy, to America. She sent Andy in a special zoo, but he didn’t like the zoo. Then, some hunters tried to kill him. Later, Andy escaped from the zoo and ran away. In the end, the woman heard the news and found Andy, then stopped the hunters. Andy was so lucky that he have a friend that could save him like that.
