[General] please help. point out the mistake.

[kamransaid]

Dear all

please point out the mistake and correct them. this is an email i had sent to my boss.



"I used the regarding reference is a subject as per your instruction, which you do not preferred me to use any more, shall I used only MRF is a subject or you want me to use specific word to use as a subject? Please let me know.

Thanks in advance & Best Regards"

 

[Academic Writing]

A little more context would help. Without the context, here is one guess (note that I am suggesting some of the changes so that your e-mail is not accidentally misconstrued to be argumentative).

"I apologize for that. Shall I use MRF as the subject or a more specific word?

Thanks in advance and best regards."

If you want a slightly more informal tone, you could change the first sentence to "Sorry about that." It depends a bit on the relationship that you have with your boss and the type of language you tend to use with each other.

If your boss is a native U.S. speaker, I would change Shall to Should.

 

[charliedeut]

Dear all,

Please point out the mistakes and correct them. This is an email I had sent to my boss.

Please use correct capitalization at the beginning of sentences. Also note that you must always capitalize the personal pronoun I.

charliedeut

 

[kamransaid]

A little more context would help. Without the context, here is one guess (note that I am suggesting some of the changes so that your e-mail is not accidentally misconstrued to be argumentative).

"I apologize for that. Shall I use MRF as the subject or a more specific word?

Thanks in advance and best regards."

If you want a slightly more informal tone, you could change the first sentence to "Sorry about that." It depends a bit on the relationship that you have with your boss and the type of language you tend to use with each other.

If your boss is a native U.S. speaker, I would change Shall to Should.

Thanks for replying. Actullay I want to know that where I made mistake in this email which i had already sent to him, my boss is spainish, although he's fine with my poor english but i want to improve my speaking and writing skill. thats it.

Thanks again.

 

[kamransaid]

Please use correct capitalization at the beginning of sentences. Also note that you must always capitalize the personal pronoun I.

charliedeut

Okay, I'll take care of it.

Regards

 

[bhaisahab]

Thanks for replying. Actually I want to know that where I made mistake in this email which I had already sent to him, my boss is Spanish, although he's fine with my poor English but I want to improve my speaking and writing skill. that's it.

Thanks again.

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[emsr2d2]

Dear all

Please point out the mistakes and correct them. This is an email I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] sent to my boss.



"I used the [STRIKE]regarding[/STRIKE] reference "[the wording of the reference]" as a subject as per your instruction, [STRIKE]which you do not preferred[/STRIKE]but you have indicated that you do not want me to use it any more. [STRIKE]shall I used only[/STRIKE] Would you like me to use "MRF" as a subject or do you want me to use a specific word? [STRIKE]to use as a subject?[/STRIKE] Please let me know.

Thanks in advance. [STRIKE]& Best Regards

[/STRIKE]

emsr2d2

 

[kamransaid]

emsr2d2

Thank you so much You are awesome.