[Essay] please help with this essay im studying alone for ielts

[hoobaessayed]

Write about the following topic:

People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Write at least 250 words.




Colleges and universities offer places for people who have the will and ambition to take a new road in their lifes which needs special possibilities available almost always their.

Other reasons to get into college is getting new experiences about the world of jobs and professiency especially by previous candidates and lecturers. Also, having opportunities to know about scientific ways of research which is the basic component of any career. Students will have the chance to recognize new work areas invented by the new needs of their community.

Another reason would be career preparation by learning about the qualifications needed by every job and to have a good interview, professional attitude and impressive CV which are the main component of any job requiry.

Finally, pupils would gain more knowledge about the workforce, studies about different jobs and realizing if they are suitable for specific one or not. In addition, having more information about postgraduates opportunities and completing in the research area with all other possibilities of studies completion and trying to develop a new ways in their career.

To recapitulate, people with different nationalities, interests and jobs would always prefer to enroll to colleges and universities as they are the most capable to make them closer to their dreams and goal of having a successful and professional life

 

[Tdol]

What grade are you hoping to achieve? I would honestly recommend holding back on doing the exam as you need to work on some basic writing skills. For instance, take a look at this:

in their lifes which needs special possibilities available almost always their.

There are two words that need changing here, and the whole thing needs rephrasing.

 

[Raymott]

I would honestly recommend holding back on doing the exam as you need to work on some basic writing skills.

Just out of interest Tdol, what are the disadvantages of doing an IELTS test at this level of competency? At least you'd get the experience, some feedback (if only as a score), and some incentive to put more effort into it for next time.

 

[emsr2d2]

I suppose it depends whether one can afford to pay for an exam one is going to fail.

 

[Raymott]

I suppose it depends whether one can afford to pay for an exam one is going to fail.

"There's no pass or fail in IELTS. Rather, all test results are reported on a clear 9-band scale (from 1, the lowest, to 9, the highest). You will receive an overall bandscore, as well as individual scores for each test component - Listening, Reading, Writing and Speaking."
http://www.ieltsessentials.com/results.aspx

Failure is subjective in this case - or dependent on what score the examinee wants or needs for a certain purpose. So is the cost the only disadvantage?

 

[Tdol]

Most people who take it are taking it for a purpose and intend to get a certain grade, say 6.5/7.0 or whatever they need to get for a course, which is the purpose of the exam. In the OP's case, the writing will require quite a bit of work to get up to standards required to achieve the grade required for that. There is no failure, but higher grades are normally asked for.