a feeling creeps uo on you and envelops you

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alpacinou

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Hello.

Can I say a feeling "creeps up on" a person and then "envelops" them?

Is this correct and natural English?

He sat in the room. Loneliness crept up on him and entirely enveloped him.
 

tedmc

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How about:

He was in the room all by himself. Loneliness crept up on him and completely overwhelmed him.
 

alpacinou

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Does envelop not work?
 

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It works for me- others may disagree.
 
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