MaryamAbbasi
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- Jun 30, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hi, I would like to ask a native speaker to take a look at these sentences and see if they're correct in English or not. They're just from a piece of writing that I wrote.
1- I remember last year, one of my best friends was graduating from university and I was supposed to throw a surprising graduation party for her at her own place. (Is it correct to say sb was graduating from university?)
2- The only person being aware of this was her mother.
3- I was suddenly aroused by her mom's call. (here I want to say I overslept and I suddenly woke up but I don't wanna use woke up I want another word if you know what I mean!, Can I say arouse? or it's not used like this in English?)
Thank you very much in advance
Mary
1- I remember last year, one of my best friends was graduating from university and I was supposed to throw a surprising graduation party for her at her own place. (Is it correct to say sb was graduating from university?)
2- The only person being aware of this was her mother.
3- I was suddenly aroused by her mom's call. (here I want to say I overslept and I suddenly woke up but I don't wanna use woke up I want another word if you know what I mean!, Can I say arouse? or it's not used like this in English?)
Thank you very much in advance
Mary
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