GoodTaste
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Is "a small hill of food" natural in English?
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At the self-service dinner in the hotel, as I was leisurely taking time to enjoy different dishes, I observed that 10 meters away from where I sat there were two women at their fifties or sixties who had a small hill of food on the table before them. They looked already full of their stomaches yet still managed to take more food as if wanting to swallow down the small hill of yummy ingredients: The sense of greed was aparently wriiten on their faces. It impressed me as if they were risking their lives to take more so as to overly repay what they'd paid for the dinner. I laughed in silence: "Stupid women! You don't know that your health is far more expensive than the food! Over nutrition kills as malnutrition does."
Source: English writing practice of Think and Writing in English by me.
Here is what a self-service dinner is like:
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At the self-service dinner in the hotel, as I was leisurely taking time to enjoy different dishes, I observed that 10 meters away from where I sat there were two women at their fifties or sixties who had a small hill of food on the table before them. They looked already full of their stomaches yet still managed to take more food as if wanting to swallow down the small hill of yummy ingredients: The sense of greed was aparently wriiten on their faces. It impressed me as if they were risking their lives to take more so as to overly repay what they'd paid for the dinner. I laughed in silence: "Stupid women! You don't know that your health is far more expensive than the food! Over nutrition kills as malnutrition does."
Source: English writing practice of Think and Writing in English by me.
Here is what a self-service dinner is like:
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