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[Rachel Adams]

Are the parts marked by asterics correct?

"Whether it's better to read a book or watch a movie is an interesting question.
In modern society, where everyone has *an internet access,* many people prefer watching movies. While they are watching a film, they enjoy their favourite actors' play and colourful pictures on the big screen. People who prefer reading books imagine the situation, environment, characters in their heads. Sometimes when we see *the* director's version of the story, it doesn't live up to our expectations. *In such way* (the) directors change the plot of the movie and it becomes a different version of the book. It's difficult to say what is better - reading books or watching movies, because it depends on *the* people's individual choice."

I think "in such way" should be changed into "in such a case". Should it be "the directors change the plot" or "the director changes the plot" if I am not talking about a specific one?

 

[teechar]

Are the parts marked by asterics asterisks correct?

"Whether it's better to read a book or watch a movie is an interesting question.
In modern society, where everyone has *an internet access, many people prefer watching movies.

[ 1] While When they are watch ing a film, they can enjoy seeing their favourite actors ' play and the colourful pictures on the big screen [ 2]. People who prefer reading books imagine the situation, environment, characters in their heads. Sometimes when we see the director's dramatised version of the story, it doesn't live up to our expectations. *In such way* (the) Directors often change/modify the plot of the to make the movie and it becomes a different version interesting. of the book. It's difficult to say what is better - reading books or watching movies, because it depends on *the* people's individual choice."

[ 1]: "While" means "during".
[ 2]: A movie can be watched on TV.